I've looked over several pages and I'm disappointed but know we can improve. I and several others have repaired the Infected page, and I'm looking too improve the Sarah page soon. The flaws I'm seeing?
- Several mistypes in one paragraph. This is strange due to the amount of edits that happen in the span of 10 minutes here. "Arownd" and They're/Their being used wrong is also common, but maybe that's just me.
- Unconfirmed 'facts' from the game.
- Awkwardly worded sentences.
- Abuse of the comma. There should not be 4 , in one sentence. Again, awkwardly worded
- Blurry images
I know we can fix this, guys.Read more >