What do you mean? It looks perfectly fine. Though, if you see any flaws, message and I'll fix it right away.

i agree. it's grammatically retarded, especially towards the end.

No offense, but your writing style could be compared to a 6th grader's essay.

Well, I wasn't the one who wrote it. Though, if you can tell me what is wrong, I'll be more than glad to fix it.

NinjaFatGuy-- Hi, there. I'm glad that you think my writing is fine. Thanks! =) Also, these commenters, above, tried to say that I really should rewrite this Issue #2 because they think it's so terrible. That's what they meant. Yes, I'm the one who grammatically wrote it "like a retard"...

To those commenters-- Well, thank you for your "feedbacks". You know, I don't mind to do rewrite the 2nd Issue, but I wonder, the first issue does bother you, too? Please let me know so I can think of something to improve both of them. Honestly, I think it would be more appericate if you will to help with this article instead of do nothing but to form a complaint comment. Doing something is more effective and helpful. Just saying.

Whosever edited and rewote this article, thank you!

Well, I hope it looks okay to you guys...