hey can the next weapon be a pipe screwed onto a monkey wrench(long range blunt weapon)oh and how bout fireworks that sticks out on the bottom of a molotov and from there you can light the firewwork then it will fly straight and then BOOM direct impact.there you like these ideas?if not its ok.if you can use these ideas i call the pipe wrench splatshot and the firework molotov new year's creed
What!?! Lol you have an Great imagination, I have Never Seen Such Madness until Now lol. I like the Projectile (FireWork Rocket) idea but I'm not to Sure a Molotov is the Best thing to Tie on to one lol (More thinking of a Smoke Bomb or A Stake Tipped Rocket) imagine a Smoke Bomb just leaving a Stream of Cover for Ellie & Joel or a Stake Tipped Rocket Flying Directly at a Bloater Hitting it in its Chest then Blowing up & Killing it. (But... If you ask me it's a bit to Cartoonish for LOU, I would stick to more Realistic Weaponds that Fit)
Like I said in other Articles New weapons such as Ramming Spears (Sharp Brooms Mops PoolSticks & PitchForks) & SlapJacks (Made out of Cloth & Stuffed with Jagged Rocks) (For Ellie since she doesn't have the Killing Power like Joel) can be Used. Also they can Create Trip Wires like Bill did for Crafting Items along with Glass Shivs (wrapped in Cloth for the Handle) and Stakes to Kill a Few Foes Vampire Style lol
This New Writing Format is way Better Cap ( No Confusion & a Smooth Read) Nice Edit (But what happened to my Joke...? It was so Sweet lol)
Anyways I like where the Story has Gone so far, it's looks like its goin to Turn into a Great Read.
(Error: Day 2 Line 25: "to" is Missing from the Sentence right around the "He Wanted "To" Kill Me" Line. (Just so you Know))
Heads up. When you do your Next Edit Revise Day 2 & 3 and change the Wording a bit, got Puzzled (More on Day 3) in a few Sentences there Cap.
Also in Day 3 (Felt there should've been a little more info) you Never told us if they Found anything & the Transition in to Dinner time was kinda Weird lol (Felt Ellie & Carmine should of Spoke More) just saying...
Like I state in the end (To be Continued) I will continue with the story, I am not done yet. I was going to do so today however a coding error crashed alot of my attempts to publish correctly and had to spend a few hours to fix it. I'm having a few errors on my end so depending on your time-zone I will continue it around 12 : 00 : 00 (UTC) that is morning for Eastern Time Zone and I will plan to pulish it around 16 : 00 : 00 or 17 : 00 :00 (UTC)
Hello, I never really got a chance to look at my message wall yet LOL. I just want to take this time to say hello and I looked over the wiki's policies/rules. I really only chat in forums and read article's on the game and don't edit anything unless it is nesseary and so far I have to say that they are really well done!